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The graph below gives information about the progress of certain diseases during childhood between 1950 and 2000 in a developing country.

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SAMPLE 1

The graph illustrates the developments of 4 diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis during childhood in developing countries from 1950 to 2000.

Overall, it’s worth to note that the Smallpox existed between 1950 and 1970, after 1970 this type of disease disappeared. However, from 1970 the countries began to suffer from new illness called AIDS.  

                The first noticeable thing is that the annual cases of Tuberculosis and Smallpox declined significantly for the first 3 decades. Tuberculosis saw a decrease from 8000 cases to 5000 and the figure for Smallpox declined from around 4000 to 2000. But the number of cases for Malaria experienced fluctuation around 2000 cases between 1950 and 1970.

For the following three decades the pattern for Malaria stayed unchanged. Moreover, there was a remarkable increase in cases of AIDS, rising from 1000 in 1980 to roughly 5000 in 2000. It was recorded 1000 AIDS cases in 1980 before experiencing fivefold increase at the end of the given period . The trend for Tuberculosis constituted just over 2000 in 1980. Further, it rose steadily, reaching around 4000 cases by 2000. (By Shera)

The graph illustrates the developments of 4 diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis during childhood in developing countries from 1950 to 2000.

Overall, it’s worth to note that the Smallpox existed between 1950 and 1970, after 1970 this type of disease disappeared. However, from 1970 the countries began to suffer from new illness called AIDS.  

                The first noticeable thing is that the annual cases of Tuberculosis and Smallpox declined significantly for the first 3 decades. Tuberculosis saw a decrease from 8000 cases to 5000 and the figure for Smallpox declined from around 4000 to 2000. But the number of cases for Malaria experienced fluctuation around 2000 cases between 1950 and 1970.

For the following three decades the pattern for Malaria stayed unchanged. Moreover, there was a remarkable increase in cases of AIDS, rising from 1000 in 1980 to roughly 5000 in 2000. It was recorded 1000 AIDS cases in 1980 before experiencing fivefold increase at the end of the given period . The trend for Tuberculosis constituted just over 2000 in 1980. Further, it rose steadily, reaching around 4000 cases by 2000. (By Shera)

The bar chart shows figures for the people who suffered from certain diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis in their childhood in developing countries during the second of the 20th century.

The number of people diseased by Tuberculosis dominated in the first 3 decades, while at the end of the given period it replaced by AIDS. The second biggest case was recorded for Malaria in the whole period. The figure for Tuberculosis showed a substantial decline from 8000 in 1950 to nearly 1500 in 1980 cases.  In the same period, cases for Malaria maintained the same level at 2000, apart from 1970, when there was recorded 1000 cases. However, Smallpox was stated only for the first three decades, with the total declining cases of 6000. From 1980 children began to suffer from new form of disease-AIDS. The pattern for AIDS increased considerably from 1000 to 6000 until the end of the century. By contrast, cases for Malaria did not change, while Tuberculosis after three consecutive decades sharply decline started to grow steadily from about 1000 up to 2000.

To summarise, during the first three decades, annual cases declined on the account of Tuberculosis and Smallpox, whereas the last three decades saw growth in the number of cases with the introduction of AIDS. (Komil)

SAMPLE 3

In this graph, it is shown information about the progress of 4 certain diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis during childhood in developing country between 1950 and 2000.

Tuberculosis cases were 8000 in the 1950 year and that declined by 4000 statements during to the 20 years. Then from in 1980, its statement began to increase again during the second of the 20 century.  With the regards to Smallpox comprised about 4000 cases and it decreased up to 2000 in 1970. However, this statistic did not follow from 1980 to at the end of the century. One of the 4 diseases is Malaria was approximately 2000. By 1960, this figure declined by about 1000. Also this figure rose again by 2000 in the 1970 year, It were not seen changes in Malaria during the whole period, not considering 1960, when there was a  declining 1000 cases.  After 1980, one of the dangerous diseases called as AIDS was added to the list of illness. The figure for the new type of disease began to rise from about 1000 cases to 6000 in 2000.

To sum up, for the first three decades, the total number of cases for the three given diseases-Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis declined remarkably, even Smallpox disappeared completely. However, for the last three decades people began to suffer from new form of disease named AIDS and with the introduction of the new disease statistics showed sharply growth. (Rustam)

The bar chart shows figures for the people who suffered from certain diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis in their childhood in developing countries during the second of the 20th century.

The number of people diseased by Tuberculosis dominated in the first 3 decades, while at the end of the given period it replaced by AIDS. The second biggest case was recorded for Malaria in the whole period. The figure for Tuberculosis showed a substantial decline from 8000 in 1950 to nearly 1500 in 1980 cases.  In the same period, cases for Malaria maintained the same level at 2000, apart from 1970, when there was recorded 1000 cases. However, Smallpox was stated only for the first three decades, with the total declining cases of 6000. From 1980 children began to suffer from new form of disease-AIDS. The pattern for AIDS increased considerably from 1000 to 6000 until the end of the century. By contrast, cases for Malaria did not change, while Tuberculosis after three consecutive decades sharply decline started to grow steadily from about 1000 up to 2000.

To summarise, during the first three decades, annual cases declined on the account of Tuberculosis and Smallpox, whereas the last three decades saw growth in the number of cases with the introduction of AIDS. (Komil)

SAMPLE 4

In this graph, it is shown information about the progress of 4 certain diseases, namely AIDS, Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis during childhood in developing country between 1950 and 2000.

Tuberculosis cases were 8000 in the 1950 year and that declined by 4000 statements during to the 20 years. Then from in 1980, its statement began to increase again during the second of the 20 century.  With the regards to Smallpox comprised about 4000 cases and it decreased up to 2000 in 1970. However, this statistic did not follow from 1980 to at the end of the century. One of the 4 diseases is Malaria was approximately 2000. By 1960, this figure declined by about 1000. Also this figure rose again by 2000 in the 1970 year, It were not seen changes in Malaria during the whole period, not considering 1960, when there was a  declining 1000 cases.  After 1980, one of the dangerous diseases called as AIDS was added to the list of illness. The figure for the new type of disease began to rise from about 1000 cases to 6000 in 2000.

To sum up, for the first three decades, the total number of cases for the three given diseases-Malaria, Smallpox and Tuberculosis declined remarkably, even Smallpox disappeared completely. However, for the last three decades people began to suffer from new form of disease named AIDS and with the introduction of the new disease statistics showed sharply growth. (Rustam)

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